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Autumn

Leaves rustle and fall,
Shadows chase candy beggars,
Your feet stay maskless.

Winter

Frost kisses the ground,
Sorrowful feet bared no more,
Soles dream of springtime.

Spring

Warm raindrops cascade,
Bare feet greet the wet sidewalk,
Puddle jumping time.

Summer

Sun scorches the street,
Lesser feet would turn away,
Your soles know no fear.
©2009 *jackhavoc
:iconjackhavoc:

Author's Comments

This was a season cycle in haiku done on a whim for a very dedicated barefooter and good buddy here on DA.
:icondementedgothangel:

After reading em she poked me until I said I'd post em. It should be noted she pokes like an expert! I couldn't say no!

She posts her written stuff on her other account
:iconlilmiznitemare:

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:icondementedgothangel:
Thank you! :hug:
I couldn't ever think of anything this good myself!

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"Ass-kissing does not a minty taste leave." Liz

"Let this remind you why you once feared the dark." Prince Nuada

I do, say, wear, think and feel what I want. I make my own way because "only dead fish go with the flow".

I write under ~lilmiznitemare
:iconjackhavoc:
Pshaw! I disagree. :huggle:
:icontjboy74:
This is the story of my feet my whole life! Thanks for capturing in words ;)
:iconjackhavoc:
Thanks, I'm glad you appreciate them! :)

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I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum...and I'm all out of ass.
:iconcopman:
Excellent Haiku.

Copman
:iconjackhavoc:
Thanks. :)

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I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum...and I'm all out of ass.
:iconkinkyfeat:
i'm not sure why i never bothered to read this... o.O

beautifully written. :D

--
The shortest distance between two people is a smile.
--Victor Borge

:)
:iconjackhavoc:
I thank you. :) I enjoyed writing it! Perhaps I need to do one for you too!

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I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum...and I'm all out of ass.
:iconkinkyfeat:
O_O that'd be greatly appreciated...

--
The shortest distance between two people is a smile.
--Victor Borge

:)

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